Talk:Ratna Sarumpaet

	Ratna Sarumpaet was one of the Media and drama good articles, but it has been removed from the list. There are suggestions below for improving the article to meet the good article criteria. Once these issues have been addressed, the article can be renominated. Editors may also seek a reassessment of the decision if they believe there was a mistake.
Article milestones Date Process Result August 9, 2012 Good article nominee Listed September 2, 2023 Good article reassessment Delisted
	A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on April 14, 2012. The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Ratna Sarumpaet's singing of the Indonesian national anthem was called "proof" of a crime?
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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk · contribs) 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

This has waited for a review too long; I'll provide one. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 22:55, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Thanks. Not as long as Poedjangga Baroe, but certainly too long. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:46, 5 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

Here are the issues I found:

• "As a teenager she moved to Jakarta to study there.[1] She attended Senior High School PSKD Menteng." these two sentences could be combined for better flow.

• Done.

• "She later returned to Indonesia." when?

• Not in source, but rephrased (how's this?)

• Is there a reason why Soeharto is used instead of Suharto?

• Dur. Usual spelling here, but you're right, we should use Suharto on Wikipedia per COMMON

• "She was not elected." did she even get on the ballot? She doesn't show up in the election article so if not, that'd be worth mentioning.

• Would I need a source that specifically says that, or is one that lists the people on the ballot acceptable?

I'll put the article on hold and will pass when the issues are fixed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 17:27, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Done most of those. One question for you. — Crisco 1492 (talk) 23:21, 8 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Showing the ballot list works fine; the rest checks out. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 02:33, 9 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• How's this? — Crisco 1492 (talk) 02:52, 9 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Looks good; article now passes. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 05:05, 9 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]

• Thanks for the review! — Crisco 1492 (talk) 05:53, 9 August 2012 (UTC)[reply]