Draft:Adam Thorn (biologist)

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• Comment: Did some searching myself and the subject appears to be notable, with better sourcing available outside this draft. But it needs a rewrite. The tone is not quite encyclopedic and suffers from subtle WP:NPOV issues. Please see WP:BETTER. Resubmit once you've done some rewriting, and also note that IMDb is not a reliable source. X (talk) 20:46, 6 May 2024 (UTC)

Adam Thorn (born July 21, 1989) is an Australian born wildlife adventurer, jungle explorer, and TV host.^[1] Best known for hosting History Channel's TV series Kings of Pain, where he subjected himself to being bitten and stung by some of the most painful animals in the world and ranking them on a comprehensive pain index.^[2]

Since about 4 years old, Adam has been obsessed with wildlife. This passion has led him to some of the most remote places on the planet, working with some of the rarest and most iconic species in the world. Adam’s lifelong involvement with animals has resulted in him producing and hosting wildlife documentaries all over the globe, ultimately forging his career as a wildlife TV host.^[3]