Draft:Deng Laka

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Comment: You have one reference duplicate three times, and all of the sources were written by the same author, i.e., Douglas H. Johnson. Try to find other reliable sources from different authors. FuzzyMagma (talk) 17:42, 26 June 2024 (UTC)

Deng Laka (D. 1907) was a Gaawar Nuer people's prophet of the divinity DIU. He led the Nuer in the famous battle called Mut Roal (Raid on Arabs) against the Twic Dinka and their “Arab” allies in which the Nuer emerged victorious. He also led the force that overthrew Nuaar Mer in 1879, the merchant's ally among Gaawar.^[1]

Among his many remarkable deeds, Deng Laka's greatest achievement besides leading the Nuer to victory in the famous Mut Roal battle, was when he brokered a peace deal that ended a feud between Radh and Bar, two of the primary sections of Gaawar Nuer.

^ Johnson, Douglas H. (1993). "Deng Laka and Mut Roal: Fixing the Date of an Unknown Battle". History in Africa. 20: 119–128. doi:10.2307/3171968. ISSN 0361-5413. JSTOR 3171968.

[:0-1] Johnson, Douglas H. (1993). "Deng Laka and Mut Roal: Fixing the Date of an Unknown Battle". History in Africa. 20: 119–128. doi:10.2307/3171968. ISSN 0361-5413. JSTOR 3171968.

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