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| Submission declined on 23 June 2024 by SafariScribe (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. This submission does not appear to be written in the formal tone expected of an encyclopedia article. Entries should be written from a neutral point of view, and should refer to a range of independent, reliable, published sources. Please rewrite your submission in a more encyclopedic format. Please make sure to avoid peacock terms that promote the subject. Declined by SafariScribe 16 days ago. | |
| Submission declined on 23 June 2024 by Qcne (talk). The content of this submission includes material that does not meet Wikipedia's minimum standard for inline citations. Please cite your sources using footnotes. For instructions on how to do this, please see Referencing for beginners. Thank you. Declined by Qcne 16 days ago. | |
Comment: Please learn how to reference correctly by following the tutorial at WP:INTREFVE. Every statement must have an in-line citation. You currently have three in-line citations and a few references at the bottom with no associated in-line citation. Every single statement must have an in-line citation. This will automatically generate a reference list for you. Qcne (talk) 11:48, 24 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: There hasn't been improvement since the last decline. Resubmitting the draft without improvements can get it rejected. Safari ScribeEdits! Talk! 20:37, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
- Comment: Please see the referencing tutorial at WP:INTREFVE Qcne (talk) 16:10, 23 June 2024 (UTC)
Kelvin D. McElroy[1]serves as the Commander of the Force Generation Center, Air Force Reserve Command, Robins Air Force Base, Georgia. Force Generation Center generates Air Force Reserve forces to support operational requirements under Global Force management. It composes about 70,000 [2]
- ^ McElroy, Kelvin (March 2024). "Biography". United States Air Force Brigadier. Retrieved June 23, 2024.
General Kelvin D. McElroy]
- ^ McElroy, Kelvin (February 8, 2024). "General comes full cirle". United States Department of defense Brigadier. Retrieved June 23, 2024.
General Kelvin D. McElroy]
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